DREAMERS

DREAMERS

Why are there so many songs about rainbows
And what’s on the other side
Rainbows are visions
But only illusions
And rainbows have nothing to hide

So we’ve been told
And some choose to believe it
I know they’re wrong, wait and see
Some day we’ll find it
The rainbow connection
The lovers, the dreamers, and me

           Lyrics to The Rainbow Connection by Kenny Ascher (music: Paul Williams)

 

 

Hello to all my fellow struggling authors. Social media allows us to share our visions and ideals with the rest of the world. But we live in a world where the market is glutted with stories. So? That shouldn’t bother us. First and foremost, we’re dreamers, wanting to share with others our experiences of wonder and awe at what our minds can create.

But—wait a minute—you’ve checked all the rating apps for your books (both traditionally and self published) and watched your ranking go down on all of them.

You’ve plastered the Internet with ads and blog posts and tweets with little or no response in sales.

What’s happening?

Your writing is clear and concise, passionate and moving. Your characters are riveting and deep. You hook readers at once and keep them hanging on from chapter to chapter. Reviewers love your work. And still that little graph on your screen tracking eBook sales is going down.

Time to stop and take a huge breath, remembering why you started writing your book(s) in the first place. Was it because you like to introduce yourself as an author, or to see your name up in lights, or to create the book you’ve always wanted to read, or the money you hope to earn? Well, it may be some of those things, but I believe all us creative people have brighter goals in mind—our dreams.

A dream can be eternal—and unless you let them—something others can’t steal from you.

And dreams are contagious. If you’re truly focused on a long-term dream, others can see that in your words, body language, and actions.

Now, just a year away from the Presidential Election, look at all the candidates. It isn’t their money that speaks most to us, or their political savvy. Potential voters can sense candidates who express their dreams powerfully. They’re the ones we all seem to be flocking to.

As an author, you have an easier time of it. It’s not about increasing your reach to include a wider demographic. That wouldn’t hurt, but ultimately, you only have one reader, one voter to truly please—yourself.

By building an ideal story world, ideal characters, and ideal conflict for your internal reader, you reinforce that dream.

So when you see your author’s rank graph going down, don’t just start on a new project, read some of what you believe is your best work to reassure yourself that you are a good storyteller and a good writer—keeper of the dream.

Reread your favorite reviews. Some day, if you resonate with your words, others will too. Remember, our unique points of view, though fragile, are also rare.

Rare things take time to grow and proliferate.

It’s your dream that needs protection.

Cradling and nurturing that dream is one of the most satisfying things an author can do.

FOR THE BEGINNING WRITER

FOR THE BEGINNING WRITER

In one of my creative writing read-and-critique classes, a first-timer asked me, “If I’m going to write anything of any length, where do I start?” I thanked him, because I’ve been struggling to find some way in which to help my fellow authors to express themselves in a more comfortable and fluid way.

Where do ideas come from?

Personally, I live a life immersed in scientific philosophy (my own cosmology). What that means is, from the time I was very young, I loved to play in the dirt, and with insects and to climb trees and to examine the clouds. That turned into a group of ideas that were nurtured as I attended classes in biology and physics and eventually publishing a paper about an expanding two-dimensional universe.

(Lots of my ramblings about the world (both human and scientific) and my awe at it can be read on my website The Union of Opposites.com (theunionofopposites.com) that mixes the physical with the spiritual.)

So, since the language in any topic of choice is so different and really inaccessible to the layperson, how can we simplify it and integrate it into our stories?

We can boil all of the above intro into three questions that I’ll attempt to answer in this post:

  1. How do I start writing?
  2. What do I write about? What topics seemed important to me both in growing up and now?
  3. Once I find a topic that impassions me, how can I edit what I write so that it speaks to my audience of readers?

Okay, so, I’m sitting at my desk, ready to type on the keyboard. What should I type?

All I can say is “should” can’t be any part of it. Don’t be like that monkey who randomly, after an infinite amount of time, types Shakespeare. But do type.

Type anything. And this may shock—type garbage. Garbage, you say? You have the most noble of goals as a writer. How can I ask you to type garbage? How can you allow yourself?

Because writing is a layered process, first you need a raw material—no matter how raw—down on the page before you can mold it into something worth reading (you can tell I’ve spent some time as a sculptor). Without creating something, it is impossible to edit. And editing may be the most creative part of the writing process.

Okay, so, the first requirement to be a good writer (someone who keeps writing and getting ideas, and doesn’t get writer’s block) is to stop judging yourself as a writer or judging any garbage you put down on the page.

How do I find a topic that’s important to me that I’m passionate about?

Explore. All scientists, with all their mathematics, still have to explore the environment. To know yourself, look at the subjects that are easy for you to write about—the writing you’ve already accomplished. If you can’t find appealing ideas within that, look for topics online and write your opinions about them. Are you practical or logical where others are not? Are you caring and idealistic wanting to see a better world? There are online tests of personality asking questions that you can expound on to find out more about yourself.

I like to write about a once-published science experiment I performed in college. I like to think about how it could apply to the real world of people to make their lives better. Maybe you have some unique way you like to do things that, if you could share them, might improve the lives of others.

How do I begin editing in order to clarify my message to others?

Personally, I attend four writing groups. Perhaps that was a bit too much to take on with still trying to sit down at a computer—type, edit, indie publish, and promote. The groups are as follows: two read-and-critique groups per week, three critique partners, and a local RWA workshop once a month.

Writing can be lonely unless one forces oneself to be social. So that’s why I interact with so many people each month. And here’s the second challenge to bravery as a writer: not only must the writer survive their own critical lathe, they must survive that of all the others. The best way to do that, even if the critique is upsetting, is to do something I have a problem with—keeping our mouths closed and respectfully taking it. The more we practice being gentle with ourselves in writing those first words, the easier it will be to take criticism from others and be polite while learning from it.

The more you listen to others and make changes you feel necessary, the more you internalize them as an audience. It’s also important to have people whose work you can edit. The more you edit and share your knowledge with others, the more comfortable you’ll be in critiquing your own work.

You might say the above paragraph sounds a little too optimistic, when you don’t even know, while editing your work, which criticism to take seriously. I take them all seriously, but some more than others. How do I prioritize the importance of my critiquer’s comments? I examine whether the changes they suggest might clarify my meaning. If they do, I keep them. If they don’t, I ignore them. But, usually, I can always find ways of making my writing clearer.

So, I’ll leave you with this:

  1. Just write and don’t expect it to be great at first.
  2. Be brave by taking criticism in a positive light, both yours and other’s.
  3. Learn by doing. You will learn from yourself and others naturally without school-like cramming the rules into your head.
  4. It’s all about the reader, to bring entertainment and joy into his/her life, so write as clearly and honestly as you can.

NEW NOVEL IN LEGENDS SERIES: LOVE ME, BITE ME: 200 PAGES AND ONLY 99 CENTS

Finally, LOVE ME, BITE ME will be released Friday, August 28, 2015.

GO DIRECTLY TO BUY PAGE:

http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B0105GC6PU/ref=as_li_tl?ie=UTF8&camp=1789&creative=390957&creativeASIN=B0105GC6PU&linkCode=as2&tag=authorshout-20&linkId=BJHPWUZ5SG5JXSDD

Front Cover LOVE ME, BITE ME 

High school senior, Chastity, is left in a human foster family with no memory of her past and never told about her roots in the psychically powerful Golden Clan, good-guy cousins to the vampires.

Sensitive about her looks and part of the out crowd, she’s compelled to find out who she really is. She starts by psychically traveling into the past to ask her human father about her roots, rescuing him from the brutal Tanzanian gangs.

Having learned to use her powers to reach her aunt, an elder in an alternate arctic universe, she discovers the Goldens want her to join them in meditation, a ritual that replenishes their psychic powers.

Chastity has other ideas. She’s got a crush on Zander the quarterback of her high school football team who, once he graduates, has his heart set on joining the Dacon Clan of real vampires. She wants to bond with him in the ancient Golden ways, but these uncivilized habits have become taboo. She has to practice the jump and bite, never having learned, first, how to kiss.

Comic-Con is fast approaching. The Dacon Clan’s Vampire Comic Booth is where Zander will be changed. If Chastity can get to him fast enough and learn how to use her small fangs to bond with him, she might be able to prevent him from losing his soul. But she needs lots of practice and who better to practice with than a Zander from a parallel universe of the future.

AMAZON BUY PAGE: http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B0105GC6PU/ref=as_li_tl?ie=UTF8&camp=1789&creative=390957&creativeASIN=B0105GC6PU&linkCode=as2&tag=authorshout-20&linkId=BJHPWUZ5SG5JXSDD

HOOKS

Hooks by S.B.K. Burns

Over a year ago, I was experimenting with setting up a blog site on which I could quickly review some of my favorite authors and reads.

The more I learned about critiquing and editing my own work, the more difficult it was for me to buy into novels, especially when their first chapter hooks left me cold.

Recently, a fellow writer from my creative writing group gave me an article with the news about how Amazon was going to change its strategy for paying authors. Just because authors priced their novels low enough, to get the books in the hands of readers, didn’t mean a particular author was any good as a storyteller. So Amazon decided they would pay the author based on how much of their book the reader actually read, and not how many copies of the book were downloaded.

The article specifically ended with, “. . . per-page payouts is a system that rewards cliffhangers and mysteries.”

Our San Diego Chapter of Romance Writers of America has held monthly workshops (http://www.rwasd.com/chapterMeetings.html) that many times touch on the value of hooks in storytelling. Hooks aren’t a great mystery. The cover of our books are the first hook (a talented cover artist, though sometimes costly, knows what works). And it costs nothing to make dramatic the first line, the first paragraph, the first page, and the first scene of our stories.

If you aren’t sure what works, there is a great book written with screenplays in mind called, “Writing for Emotional Impact,” by Karl Iglesias. Another book specifically on the topic of hooks is “Hooked” by Les Edgerton. Or just spend some time taking notes and watching your favorite movies, how they hook the audience around every corner.

An example, following the first paragraph of a possible prologue for my work in progress (WIP) Flat Spin:

[1] Anthony Harbough Wilsoner, president of the United States of North America put the headset, his Secret Service man handed him, over his ears. [2] The external noise canceling ear guards caught a few hairs from the sides of his head, most probably those that had turned gray during his administration. [3] How long did they expect him to pretend his wife was in this secret medical facility for a devastatingly quick onset of Alzheimer’s and not what she was really there for?

If you had to select from one of the first three sentences, which one, taken as is, would make the most compelling hook? If you said that you were mostly engaged emotionally when you discovered something had happened to the first lady, it wasn’t Alzheimer’s, and some group of people had something over the president, forcing him to lie to the public about it—you’d be right in selecting number 3.

Before a scene ends, try to start some kind of compelling action, then make the reader wait a scene or until the beginning of the next chapter for the conclusion. That’s the cliffhanger referred to. Some authors put a cliffhanger at the end of their novels so the reader will want to buy the sequel. This technique usually backfires because it sometimes refuses to the reader a satisfying ending.

Please contact me at sbkburns@gmail.com with any further questions you might have about hooks.

Thanks,

Susan (S.B.K. Burns)

ENTER A NEW CONTEST/READ NEW VOICES/GET YOUR VOICE HEARD

EVER HEARD OF INKITT?  www.inkitt.com

Alexa (www.alexa.com) says the Inkitt rank is about 90,000 in the US. What does that mean? It means they get lots of traffic. It means if you enter any of their contests, lots of people will see you, hear your author voice. (any rank under half a million is good for authors).

Go to their website and read posts from former and present contests. 

And VOTE for my contribution: ROOMIES. It’s a short, offbeat and quirky story (my usual) about an invisible alien who rooms with three teenagers on Earth. And they don’t even know he exists until it’s too late. OR IS IT?

VOTE HERE: http://www.inkitt.com/stories/15580

Oh, yes, the girl I’ve chosen to head up the story’s image is none other than Chastity, hidden in the background of the LOVE ME, BITE ME  cover reveal (below). SEE BELOW:

Albino girl in jungle

COVER REVEAL: LOVE ME, BITE ME

LOVE ME, BITE ME, the second book in the LEGENDS OF THE GOLDENS SERIES is in PRE-ORDER for 99 cents at Amazon. It’s the continuing story of Chastity (from A FAR FAR BETTER THING free on Kindle and Nook), the human/Golden hybrid that has the Golden community on edge. She’s fallen for her high school quarterback, who has decided to become officially changed into a vampire at San Diego’s Comic-Con. If she bonds with him before that, she might save his soul, but poor Chastity doesn’t even know how to kiss. So she finds a Zander of the future to practice bond on. Unfortunately practice Zander falls for her and has to compete with her real Zander of his past.

Chastity also appears in subsequent books in the series published by Soul Mate: FORBIDDEN PLAYGROUND and DANCING DRAGONS. She’s the wise Golden elder aunt to her nieces and nephews, the main characters in those books. And she appears prominently with Zander in DANCING DRAGONS.

Now for the cover reveal:

LoveMeBiteMe Paperback cover reveal(3)

 

TO PRE-ORDER, CLICK THIS LINK http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B0105GC6PU?*Version*=1&*entries*=0

A FAR FAR BETTER THING STILL IN THE TOP 100

A FAR FAR BETTER THING prequel novella to the offbeat and quirky LEGENDS OF THE GOLDENS SERIES of sci-fi, paranormal psychic romances continues to be downloaded and in Amazon’s Best Seller Ranking for several months. 

FREE: Please download this introduction to the series where the first Golden/human hybrid, Chastity, is naturally born and creates havoc within the Golden community.

http://www.amazon.com/Better-Thing-Legends-Goldens-Book-ebook/dp/B00SI9NOX0/ref=asap_bc?ie=UTF8

 

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NEW WORLD-BUILDING IDEAS BRANCH OF “THE UNION OF OPPOSITES” WEBSITE IS LAUNCHED

Want to write a science fiction novel, or stand for a cause that involves climate change?

Whether you want to write fiction or nonfiction, it’s important to be able to think beyond what’s in the news. Use news items that people care about to fashion a story that will intrigue.

The World Building branch of “The Union of Opposites” website will bring to you ideas from the Twitter science community. New words and philosophies that will give you a unique view on what’s happening in this world, or maybe the next.

So, stop by, and maybe even add your imagination of what worlds might look like in the future.

Looking forward to seeing you there.

Susan (S.B.K. Burns)

Science-based World Building Homepage http://theunionofopposites.com/

World Building Ideas Blog http://theunionofopposites.com/category/world-building/

“A FAR FAR BETTER THING” REACHES AMAZON’S TOP 100

Thank you, Penny Sansevieri and your team at Author Marketing Experts (AME), for driving A Far Far Better Thing, FREE prequel novella to my Legends of the Goldens paranormal series to Amazon’s top 100 romantic tales about psychics and science fiction.

link: www.authormarketingexperts.com

To read Far Far and other tales from the Legends of the Goldens Series:

Forbidden Playground, Dancing Dragons, and, soon to be released, Love Me. Bite Me. 

Go to link: http://www.amazon.com/S.-B.-K.-Burns/e/B00GFWV5PQ/ref=ntt_dp_epwbk_0