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Dancing Dragons (Book 2: Legends of the Goldens Series) Blurb

An environmental activist re-examines her treatment of endangered species when she comes face-to-face with a rare and handsome space alien who’s animated chest tattoos do the most suggestive things.

Eco warrior, Maggie Maclaurin, can somehow see through Andrew Everett’s conjured fraternity disguise: he’s a psychic cousin to the vampires, and with those flying dragon tattoos undulating across his naked chest, positively an endangered species, definitely in need of saving. But when real vampires make a pact with the corrupt government to bring a little more nasty onto campus, Maggie’s chaotic vibes keep Andrew from protecting her, make him sick each time he comes in for a nibble from the neck of this attractive, yet headstrong girl. Can Andrew forget about his self-centeredness long enough to gain Maggie’s trust, so he can save her from the vampires’ fangs, and if he does, who will save her from his own?

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Excerpt: 

“We saved the world. That we did.” Crumpled cup still in hand, Red motioned for Andrew to follow him to the edge of the jungle.

“So is this Earth, the one I was born into different from that other one?” Andrew used his hand to wipe the wet sand from the bottom of his warmups.

Studying the boy in front of him who could have easily removed the sand with a conscious thought, Red pulled a damp towel from his pocket and suppressed a smile. “Ya do ask a lot of questions.”

Kick-Ass Critiques from Melody of Love Contest Judges

Well, folks, didn’t final with Fly Like An Eagle my 1824 steampunk romance between a Native American raised between two worlds and a “proper” Philadelphian young woman who has the honor of deciding to choose between the world of science and the world of spirit.

However, the judges were exceptionally thorough in their shared strategies on how to make my tale more lively. Thank you to them.

For all those who think contests are a thing of the past in romance, maybe think again.  Depth and honesty don’t come easy in the critiquing business.